Ok, so after taking some comments on board, I've tried to re work this. Ive added in a little profile where I summarize some of my personal attributes. I added a summary of my education and training to include my GCSE's (although I didn't give details on what grades I got for what subject-does anyone think this matters?) I then also dropped 'Choreographers worked with' on Aicha's advise.
Did anyone else struggle to fit everything they wanted to point out onto one page? Do we think its important to try and fit it all on one, or is it ok to spread neatly over 2, and get all previous work in there?
Here's the link, again, thanks for your thoughts and comments in advance!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k_l9wSEvrAoRbvfkAlnSLxEddFBy3CdUr_0uZNem3Kk/edit?hl=en_US